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Permalink Reply by Carter Wolf on March 7, 2012 at 10:11am

gosh darn it i forgot to place the words bridge and chorus DX egh lol alright i know for a fact verse eight is the chorus and im not exactly sure where exactly the bridge should be at..hm oh! verse nine is the bridge lol

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 7, 2012 at 1:44pm

Here is another song

It hurts so much

To be out of touch

I’m all alone

And all on my own

I feel so bad

Things I used to have

Float over here

And then disappear

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I feel the pain

My head is a drain

Of emotions

No more good notions

I’ve disappeared

With the going years

I have no thoughts

I must have forgot

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

(Guitar Solo)

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I’m walking on earth now on my own

I’m losing my life without a home

I’m rotting in the path of despair

But no one really even cares!!!

Permalink Reply by Carter Wolf on March 9, 2012 at 11:20am

wow o.o thats some meaningful stuff mike lol i like it

Mike Mantecon said:

Here is another song

It hurts so much

To be out of touch

I’m all alone

And all on my own

I feel so bad

Things I used to have

Float over here

And then disappear

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I feel the pain

My head is a drain

Of emotions

No more good notions

I’ve disappeared

With the going years

I have no thoughts

I must have forgot

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

(Guitar Solo)

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I’m walking on earth now on my own

I’m losing my life without a home

I’m rotting in the path of despair

But no one really even cares!!!

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 9, 2012 at 11:23am

Thanks...that is what i usually make songs about

shawn Autieri said:

wow o.o thats some meaningful stuff mike lol i like it

Mike Mantecon said:

Here is another song

It hurts so much

To be out of touch

I’m all alone

And all on my own

I feel so bad

Things I used to have

Float over here

And then disappear

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I feel the pain

My head is a drain

Of emotions

No more good notions

I’ve disappeared

With the going years

I have no thoughts

I must have forgot

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

(Guitar Solo)

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I’m walking on earth now on my own

I’m losing my life without a home

I’m rotting in the path of despair

But no one really even cares!!!

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 10, 2012 at 1:37pm

here's a poem i wrote. It's really deep, don't read it unless you're ready

The ticking clock goes wild

And dead is every child

The ticking heart just stops

And everyone just drops

 

The world starts to realize

Right before they close eyes

To the things they hate to see

Pain, loss, and misery

 

But those who can’t close eyes

Never get to realize

The life that lies beyond the lies

Before every child dies

 

And souls spin around the hell

And turn the light off, ring the bell

Call hatred a funny smell

When you really know you’re lying well

 

When the lies and truth meet

Faithfully on the street

Evil comes to heaven’s bell

But I rather be good and burn in hell

Permalink Reply by Carter Wolf on March 12, 2012 at 12:36pm

thats some deep stuff mike o-o wow , nice

Mike Mantecon said:

here's a poem i wrote. It's really deep, don't read it unless you're ready

The ticking clock goes wild

And dead is every child

The ticking heart just stops

And everyone just drops

 

The world starts to realize

Right before they close eyes

To the things they hate to see

Pain, loss, and misery

 

But those who can’t close eyes

Never get to realize

The life that lies beyond the lies

Before every child dies

 

And souls spin around the hell

And turn the light off, ring the bell

Call hatred a funny smell

When you really know you’re lying well

 

When the lies and truth meet

Faithfully on the street

Evil comes to heaven’s bell

But I rather be good and burn in hell

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 12, 2012 at 12:46pm

thnx:) I'm a poet and a writer along with a songwriter, so i appreciate that u like my other works:)

shawn Autieri said:

thats some deep stuff mike o-o wow , nice

Mike Mantecon said:

here's a poem i wrote. It's really deep, don't read it unless you're ready

The ticking clock goes wild

And dead is every child

The ticking heart just stops

And everyone just drops

 

The world starts to realize

Right before they close eyes

To the things they hate to see

Pain, loss, and misery

 

But those who can’t close eyes

Never get to realize

The life that lies beyond the lies

Before every child dies

 

And souls spin around the hell

And turn the light off, ring the bell

Call hatred a funny smell

When you really know you’re lying well

 

When the lies and truth meet

Faithfully on the street

Evil comes to heaven’s bell

But I rather be good and burn in hell

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 12, 2012 at 4:10pm

Here's a new song

The pain comes again

My essence is drained

From your hit and spit

But I can’t just quit

 

I know, that my foes

Will all disappear

But when, O but when

Will it be this year?

 

It’s harder to bear the pain

It’s so much harder to do

Then just turning away, but

It is what I have to do

 

The cuts, they hurt, but

I’ m not giving up

The scars, there they are

I’ve gotten so far

 

It hurts bad, I’m so sad

Nothing makes glad

I still live, I still give

I’ll just have to forgive

 

It’s harder to bear the pain

It’s so much harder to do

Then just turning away, but

It is what I have to do

 

I try to forget

In my retrospect

I try to neglect

All the pain I get

 

It hurts me to give

All of which I live

And I can’t forget

I’ll just have to forgive

 

Forgive myself now

I’m forgiven as well

I hear them starting chanting

After I ring my bell

 

It’s harder to bear the pain

It’s so much harder to do

Then just turning away, but

It is what I have to do

 

It’s harder to bear the pain

It’s so much harder to do

Then just turning away, but

It is what I have to do

Permalink Reply by Katrina. B on March 13, 2012 at 6:08am

'Spell of Hahn the magician'

Art done by Krongjit Saitong also known as ExotiquesFrors (lpu profile)

i think this is so awesome. guys this art was done to celebrate Joe's bithday.

please comment

 

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Permalink Reply by Katrina. B on March 13, 2012 at 7:01am

Art done by Krongjit Saitong also known as ExotiquesFrors (lpu profile)

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another awesome drawing

 

 

Permalink Reply by Katrina. B on March 15, 2012 at 6:22am

hey i like this one

Mike Mantecon said:

Here is another song

It hurts so much

To be out of touch

I’m all alone

And all on my own

I feel so bad

Things I used to have

Float over here

And then disappear

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I feel the pain

My head is a drain

Of emotions

No more good notions

I’ve disappeared

With the going years

I have no thoughts

I must have forgot

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

(Guitar Solo)

 

I’m walking on earth as a shadow

I’m losing my life in this battle

I’m walking on till I disappear

I’m losing my strength and all my fears

 

I’m walking on earth now on my own

I’m losing my life without a home

I’m rotting in the path of despair

But no one really even cares!!!

Permalink Reply by Andrew on March 15, 2012 at 7:15am

  There're my verses, here can be errors, don't judge strictly please =)

1. I dream about the life              
Where people don't stay behind your soul                 
where you can just stay alive 

without fighting for your living role 

I dream about the world 
where everybody like a bird 
that doesn't have to hide the trees beyond 
where you can go wherever you want 
and nobody will be in your road 
This is my dream 
I think in future we will 
Change something in this 'glorious' real 
But just the one thing i can do now 
is dream about our successful real.

2. But to change our reality
 you should think about your personality
 People, look at the mirror
 Do you see there a Hero? 
 Leightweights stand up and go out 
 They cant say their wishes aloud
 I dream about the world
 Where gold doesn't play the main role
 And everybody has a soul
 To dream with me and see what will be
 But just the one thing i can do now 
 is say this words to you 
 'Cause in some ways their really true.

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