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Permalink Reply by Nico nico ^w^ on January 10, 2012 at 10:04pm

wow!!! awesome!!! :3 hehehe all people have an artist inside...no matter what if u make music, poems, drawings!!! THATS WHAT AN ARTIST DO!!!! SOMETIMES PEOPLE THINK THAT THEY DONT HAVE AN ARTIST INSIDE....BUT I THINK ITS CUZ THEY DONT PERMIT HIM TO GET OUT FROM THE JAR!!! HEHEH WOW REALLY MEN UR AWESOME!!!! WE WANT IT!! :D AND THX!!

Permalink Reply by Aaralyn D on March 5, 2012 at 10:10pm

same me, Ryan :) Look forward to hearing some of your stuff! :) :) :)

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 6, 2012 at 10:42am

hey, guys, i love drawing but my real passion is songwriting. I could share some of my songs with you guys if you want

Permalink Reply by Carter Wolf on March 6, 2012 at 10:54am

i used to draw but i dropped that awhile ago, studied canines a lot and i still do it but writing songs is pretty much a great passion for me, i love it, so i'll share some songs too :3

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on March 6, 2012 at 2:16pm

here is a song i wrote. It needs music, but here are the lyrics:

(Verse 1)

It hurts so much

I’m out of touch

I walk around

Without a sound

I’m a shadow

My bones rattle

Desperation

No elation

Feeling so bad

But yet so sad

Feeling alone

Without a home

I am good now

But still somehow

They think of me

As I was before

And I cry once more

 

(Chorus)

Give me a second chance

I have changed myself

But they don’t believe me

They think I am still myself

 

People can change sometimes

They don’t think this way

They think what I did before

Is how I’ll always behave

 

(Verse 2)

I get so tired

My brain is wired

With this bad pain

Emotional Drain

I can’t react

I’m not intact

Losing control

Within my soul

I am now dead

Inside my head

But pain’s still there

I’m unaware

I feel so sick

A death too quick

They think that this

Is all an act

That I’m still intact

But I’m dying

And I keep crying

 

(Chorus)

Give me a second chance

I have changed myself

But they don’t believe me

They think I am still myself

 

People can change sometimes

They don’t think this way

They think what I did before

Is how I’ll always behave

 

(Bridge)

How can right

Feel so wrong

Feeling bad

All along

 

Sometimes I wish

To disappear

Then remember

That I’m needed here

 

And I’m helping

Trying for you

So please, O please

Remember to

 

(Chorus)

Give me a second chance

I have changed myself

But they don’t believe me

They think I am still myself

 

People can change sometimes

They don’t think this way

They think what I did before

Is how I’ll always behave

Permalink Reply by Aaralyn D on March 26, 2012 at 1:11am

Nice words :)

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:50pm

Stressing 

By Ryan Sullivan

Sitting at a desk staring at a wall

Find a way to block this wall

Way to much in my mind just another time

Look at the clock time has gone by I feel so dry

Wondering what the hell happened to all my information

I just need to be in reformation

Just need to think my way around this test

Staring at a white desk where words are written saying

“You will fail” and “Just give it a rest”

No, No! I say to myself this can’t happen

This is too much what the hell is happening to me

I just becoming a lost prodigy of getting good grades

Now just becoming a wasted space of an endless race

Where I am always behind trying to fight this endless time

That’s making my brain explode in half making my senses into a wrath of pain and misery crying out for someone to please help me. Making a rhyme that makes mic’s fall. Help HELP I cry out for help but none of my teachers hear me at all.

I am just lost inside this endless space wondering what will happen to me when I fail this test. I guess no one can see that I am in stress and I just I will give it a rest for eternity.

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:52pm

Unite

By Ryan Sullivan

I'll rap till i die

I won't cry

Just say Hi and i will be alive

To rap again in your face and fuck your life

Because tonight’s the end the end to be the best i must protect my identity

Because on the mic' am superman flowing through the words

Making you pussies cry from my crazy rhymes

I don't lie because i am the best the best i can be against my enemies

as ya can see it’s my density to be the best and the best i can be i am just young not tall or strong but on the mic am King Kong. So let me put it all together in a song because once ya hear it the thoughts of taking me down will be gone. I am the next king

but to all my white rappers i stand and say to ya come with me to protect our land against this enemies and come all my rappers whether black or white and tonight

We’ll unite to fight.

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:53pm

My Reflection

By Ryan Sullivan

Sometimes I look at myself I don’t know who I am

Just a reflection in a mirror waiting to escape this fear

Wondering why, while the clock goes by

Thinking of what they will think of me

Trying to get away from this fear

That’s tearing me apart of my body parts

Trying to look normal trying to take control

But it’s so hard to take away this toll I have to pay

To be normal in a way

Taking pills three at once till you are fed up

With life you try to keep your head straight

Finding away from this hate

A puzzle that has no way to leave

No place to escape this cold dark feeling

That washes over me killing chilling my bones

Till all you have left is skin and bones

Trying to help myself in every single way

Till every single day you cry in your bed

Never wanting to see the day again

Praying for a day that will get me away

This is what my friend has been through

So I dedicate this song to you

 

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:53pm

Nothing Left

By Ryan Sullivan

 

I am done Kayla nothing is left I feel like death yeah death inside isn't that right when you feel you want to cry you just curl up and cut and lose your mind to the beats of your heart you feel inside. You just hating all the things in your life when you feel so alone and you’re dead inside put a ball in my heart because there is nothing left you can hear the clatter of my empty chest. You can say you don't want me to die but in the inside you feel no hope left your stressed and cut from the inside out just finding a place to seek help. So to end this song on a right note i will just say for my words I wrote that all the things in life don't always go as planned I clearly saw that today when life flashed from my hands.

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:54pm

Kim

By Ryan Sullivan

Here’s a little story about my ex-girlfriend Kim

The person that I love deep within

You see me and Kim met through my ex

At the time Kim was dating my friend

I liked Kim the day I saw her

I was stunned by the way I wanted her

Me and my ex broke up Me and Kim talked

We talked and talked for 7 months straight

Those seven months were the best days of my life

Now I am a failure, lost and wrecked

But me and Kim started dating in April

I was the happiest guy in the world

Then things turned when I fell

In May I was at chorus

I collapsed and took a fall

It scared the shit out of Kim

I was in the hospital for as long as I remember 7 hours of none stop terror. I texted Kim hour to hour she stayed up until I got better. She is the best person I know no one is better she is an angel sent down to make me better she is my dream girl I loved at first sight. Well after I fell I fell again on the night of the concert for chorus once again. Kim was crying her eyes out and loved me to death I needed to see her before I was sent to my death. Yeah I was scared I thought I was dying cause of the tests my body was just crying. This is the longest rap I have ever made but it should be the longest since Kim is my babe (Troll).

 

Well I found out that I developed a sickness from the collapsing they thought I was been visited by my past of disease of epilepsy. “Well no it wasn’t, no it isn’t, NO!, NO!, NO!” I screamed myself to sleep trying to pray I would find out about this sickness in a day. Well it didn’t take just a couple of days no its took 7 fucking months.

Permalink Reply by Ryan Sullivan on March 26, 2012 at 12:54pm

Go Away

By Ryan Sullivan

(Goes to What I’ve Done by Linkin Park)

 

 

For all this regret

I have shed over a million lives

I feel sorrow for my ways and days

Just messing up, and I want it to go

 

Chorus:  

Just go, JUST GO AWAY!!! (Hold)

I’ve felt this pain from me

It’s all my fault

You’ve just got to go, JUST GO AWAY!!!(Hold)

 

So you have known the mistakes

From me that I put on you

I messed up but no way I felt come through

So please just come, just come THIS WAY!

 

Chorus:

JUST GO AWAY!!! (Hold)

I’ve felt this pain from me

It’s all my fault

You’ve just got to go, JUST GO AWAY!!(Hold)

 

 

 

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