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Permalink Reply by George White on February 16, 2012 at 10:53pm

Chances Lyrics

 

Verse 1

If you let me ill save you

From this eternal pain

I’ll take you to paradise

It won’t be the same

 

Verse 2

If you’d open up w

We could talk through the problem

I could convert you and tell you

I’ve forget them

 

Chorus

If you give me a chance

I’ll be a better man

If you give me a chance

I’ll do what I can

 

Verse 3

When you say those three words

I hope they are true

Cuz I don’t want to be standing at deaths door

With anyone but you

 

 

 

 

Verse 4

My lifelong soul mate

My angel in disguise

It didn’t have to be like this

Full of hatred and lies

 

 

 

Chorus

If you gave me a chance

I could have been a better man

If you gave me the chance

I could a done all that can

 

Verse 5

But its finished the deed is done

Your memories left behind

Like the setting sun

So oblivious so blind

 

Verse 6

Our past remains left

Our future in shatters

It’s time to leave you behind

And focus on what matters

 

 

Bridge

That one chance

To prove I was a better man

Was left in the past, in the mess

That I’m moving on, best I can !

2nd Song : Chances 

Permalink Reply by Scotty Luo on February 16, 2012 at 10:53pm

good ~I`m gonna write too
 
George White said:

I Hope Not And Ive Done More Lyrics :P

 

Permalink Reply by George White on February 16, 2012 at 11:01pm

Okay :) 

Permalink Reply by Katrin Kaskla on February 16, 2012 at 11:10pm

Hey Scotty. Can you make your song shared with everybody? I can't listen it. :(

Permalink Reply by Scotty Luo on February 16, 2012 at 11:12pm

Ok ! give me your email address ,I`ll send them to you ~

Permalink Reply by Katrin Kaskla on February 17, 2012 at 5:00am

First verse of my song:

I'm looking at the mirror

And all I see it's me

But something isn't real

Like just another dream

All thoughts, what I wanted to say

All words just stuck in my head

They faded somewhere away

I don't know what to do, I'm afraid

Well, it's first verse. Just say, what do you think about it. Some of you have already told me, what they think about it, right now I´m working on the chorus and other verses... and it´s seems, that I will finish it soon. :D

Permalink Reply by Katrin Kaskla on February 18, 2012 at 3:54am

Looking for myself

Verse 1

I´m looking at the mirror

And all I see it´s me

But something isn´t real

Like just another dream

 

Verse 2

All thought what I wanted to say

All words just stuck in my head

They faded somewhere away

I don´t know what to do, I´m afraid

 

Chorus

I always lose my battles

Try to stand, but I´m falling

And I know it doesn´t matter

If I´m laughing or crying

 

So why I have to fight?

Why I feel so much pain?

Will I ever see the light?

Will I ever love again?

 

Verse 3

I´m looking into your eyes

I see the answer there

I read the truth in your lies

I feel the cold and fear

 

Verse 4

You said that I´m nothing to you

I´m out of respect

And there is nothing to lose

These words is hard to forget

 

Chorus

I always lose my battles

Try to stand, but I´m falling

And I know it doesn´t matter

If I´m laughing or crying

 

So why I have to fight?

Why I feel so much pain?

Will I ever see the light?

Will I ever love again?

 

Bridge

But now I show, who I really am

I will take this step closer to you

And you will never bring me down

And never hurt or taunt me, too

 

I feel the power inside of me

All bad feelings have thrown away

The sunlight warm my cheek

I found myself and the right way

 

Just say, what do you think about it. I think, that before bridge, there should be the instrumental solo. I hope you´ll enjoy that song.

Permalink Reply by Scotty Luo on February 19, 2012 at 8:55am

wow ...that`s amazing ...good girl !

 
Katrin Kaskla said:

Looking for myself

Verse 1

I´m looking at the mirror

And all I see it´s me

But something isn´t real

Like just another dream

 

Verse 2

All thought what I wanted to say

All words just stuck in my head

They faded somewhere away

I don´t know what to do, I´m afraid

 

Chorus

I always lose my battles

Try to stand, but I´m falling

And I know it doesn´t matter

If I´m laughing or crying

 

So why I have to fight?

Why I feel so much pain?

Will I ever see the light?

Will I ever love again?

 

Verse 3

I´m looking into your eyes

I see the answer there

I read the truth in your lies

I feel the cold and fear

 

Verse 4

You said that I´m nothing to you

I´m out of respect

And there is nothing to lose

These words is hard to forget

 

Chorus

I always lose my battles

Try to stand, but I´m falling

And I know it doesn´t matter

If I´m laughing or crying

 

So why I have to fight?

Why I feel so much pain?

Will I ever see the light?

Will I ever love again?

 

Bridge

But now I show, who I really am

I will take this step closer to you

And you will never bring me down

And never hurt or taunt me, too

 

I feel the power inside of me

All bad feelings have thrown away

The sunlight warm my cheek

I found myself and the right way

 

Just say, what do you think about it. I think, that before bridge, there should be the instrumental solo. I hope you´ll enjoy that song.

Permalink Reply by Scotty Luo on February 19, 2012 at 9:00am

I really love this lyric ...and when I was reading it ,tears are in my eyes
 
Katrin Kaskla said:

Looking for myself

 

Permalink Reply by Katrin Kaskla on February 20, 2012 at 1:23am

I'm really glad, that you liked it. :) Mike was right, when you write about you're own life, your lyrics are really sensitive. But sorry for tears. :P Do you going to rap this song?

Permalink Reply by Mike Mantecon on February 20, 2012 at 7:53pm

great katrin:D

p.s i made another song. This one is a very deep and dark, so i do not mean to insult anyone, and those with weaker constitutions please do not read this:

The Fire Dead in Me

Written by Mike Mantecon

(Verse 1)

Sometime to time

I find it hard to cope

Another rhyme

Another crime

With Alkaline

I find that there’s no hope

 

Another death

Within my bloody hand

Is crying souls

Refusing tolls

Of eating coals

 

(Chorus)

From the fire dead in man

 

From the fire dead in man

 

From the fire dead in me

 

(Verse 2)

It’s hard to think

When I start to go drink

Start to see man

From heaven’s hand

He’ll go to hell

 

(Chorus)

For the fire dead in man

 

For the fire dead in man

 

For the fire dead in me

 

(Bridge)

I start to see

Deep inside me

The evil coals

Of the fire of man

In everyone’s hand

O why can’t I go?

 

To hell

To hell

To hell

To hell

To hell

 

I need to wake up

Hell

I need to shape up

Hell

And get out of this

Hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If not I face

 

(Final Chorus)

The fire dead in man

 

The fire dead in man

The fire dead in me

 

Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Scotty Luo on February 22, 2012 at 4:57pm

that`s cool Mike

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