I hope to impact the world of LP fans with my lyrics from my band I started called Jaime's Epitaph
Love is fucked up lately...
Nothing is what it seems to be
Everything is not for me
Love is so dead lately everyday of my life
You are my love but you're so numb tonight
Kill me inside, I cannot take your lies
You should walk away and stop hurting me tonight
Fear is always consuming me
Why is it you that deceives me?
I'm confused, but I hate you
You said one moment that I love you
Then you changed your mind and killed me inside
You make me feel like suicide
You make me feel used
And I can't trust you
I wanna break free and hide from you
I can't even love you
You said you'd break the habit
But you are so full of shit
I need you to go away!
I don't want you to stay!
Just run away!
You are all the same like the rest of my past lovers anyway!
I CAN'T BELIEVE IN YOU!
Just go before you end up breaking me apart and killing me...
Tell me what ya think of that i can add more later
There alright. a bit deep and your using a lot of linkin park song titles / relating to linkin park, which makes me think that you didnt fully go out and write this for the love of music and poetry. I know you probably love linkin park to death as do i but, you gotta get your own style and words in order to fully be respected in the music business. and dont just write whatever that comes to your mind and mash in stuff from other bands. be creative and write from the heart about things thats been on your mind. Not saying its bad but you cant expect everyone to say its good cuz some people may be lying and im just being the honest one.