okay so this is a song about a girl, but its going to sound kinda like Sum 41 "Hell song" in terms of timing. let me know what you think

"She is"

no reason to sleep, no reason to dream, no reason to awake to the morning light, no reason to feel, no emotions left inside i had a reason for it all then you took it away, do you have a heart? or is it gone? do you know how to love or has that fallen apart? maybe your unsure but i know i'm going to stay strong.

(chorus)
And I do And I wait for the morning light which is her which is her she's the reason i'm not dark anymore, don't you see don't see how happy we could be, she's my light she's my love she's everything i need, she's the reason the bad times are all gone. don't you see don't you see we are happy together, now follow me now follow me and you'll see how much she means to me.

(verse 2)
I'd fight, I'd die, I'd win, I'd lose, all for her, she's all i want all i need and everything in between, she showed me light when all i knew was darkness and she pulled me right out, showed me how to live with a smile on my face, a light in my eye, and a heart that beats for only her....

(chorus)
And I do And I wait for the morning light which is her which is her she's the reason i'm not dark anymore, don't you see don't see how happy we could be, she's my light she's my love she's everything i need, she's the reason the bad times are all gone. don't you see don't you see we are happy together, now follow me now follow me and you'll see how much she means to me.

(Verse 3)
I'll wait if you want me to, I'll fade away if thats what you want, I'll bury myself six feet underground and never resurface unless you want me to, But if you dig me up and call me back I'll be right here, right now, right then, right how? because or love will prevail

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WOW that's good. That's REALLY GOOD!!!!!!! XD
pretty good...however upon reading dome of the lyrics. they sounded very familiar from other songs
LOL Thank you Sirene, I will be on my new CD coming in July, and Phantom do you know what songs? that way i can fix what needs to be fixed although alot of songs sound like others or lyrics match thank you for your input and I'd gladly make any changes you can think of
Almost Awsome!!! very-very-very nice!!!
"I'd fight, I'd die...." sound similar to Bryan Adams 'Everything I do (I do it for you)....and some lyrics are similar to that of Snow Patrols songs....BUT your lyrics arent the exact same....they just sound similar.....so no need to change anything.

CD? Is it your first?
Oh okay thank you for the feedback I'm going to listen to that song and see, I trust you that no changes are needed, and Yes I'm putting out my first demo CD and it should be out by July if all goes well

Thank you Kate :)

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