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Comment by Andy Potapov on January 30, 2010 at 6:50am

Vladislav is my best friend)

Comment by Vladislav on January 30, 2010 at 6:42am

Forgive
Mother please, forgive me now
I was wrong, I don’t know how
Time has gone and I came home
Today I whisper you forget
I whisper you forget

I was young and parents said
That I mast find my own way
I had grown and left my child
Home
I start live alone
I’ve already forgot your face
And I can’t remember your eyes
Road is coming to my grave
I have lose in the sky my star
So my way is an emptiness
I try to ask the forgiveness

Mother please, forgive me now
I was wrong, I don’t know how
Time has gone and I came home
Today I whisper you forget
I whisper you forget

Now I am returning home
Tears in my eyes
“Mum, forgive, I was so wrong
I sink in the sea of lies”
Mother take my hand and say
Don’t cry, my little son
You stay on the path of
Your light way
After rain will be shining sun
So I never live my Mum
I was not I, but now he’s gone

Chorus (2x)

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 29, 2010 at 12:13pm

I live in the world, that full of war,
I live in the way, that is opening door,
The door is the entry to death, not for life,
The sound of death like a spear or knife.
The house is left by the enemy, that
Don't know who is good and who really bad,
Just doing the job is the point of war,
Just doing the job is all I know.

Chorus:
The war is all my life, I know, but why,
Why should I kill the men who has the child and wife?
We all are humans in the world, but all
Are going on the dutie's first call.

Who knows what is true and where is lie?
Who asking himself the question like "Why?".
Who see where is day and where is night?
Who knows where is own and enemie's side?

Chorus:
The war is all my life, I know, but why,
Why should I kill the men who has the child and wife?
We all are humans in the world, but all
Are going on the dutie's first call.

***********************************************************
The day and the night are both parts of each other,
All humans in world are the nearest brothers,
But I shouldn't care the life, that I'm killing,
The pain in the soul is a terrible feeling.

Chorus:
The war is all my life, I know, but why,
Why should I kill the men who has the child and wife?
We all are humans in the world, but all
Are going on the dutie's first call.

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 29, 2010 at 12:13pm

Every human in the world has a soul,
And a soul is a small world
With its own good and bad sides,
The soul for the life called.
This world very hard keeps balance
Between darkness and the light at all,
I was born with a soul full of lightness,
But soon got second world.

Chorus:
The world has two sides in a humans,
Two sides are everywhere in world,
But I have not two sides in one soul,
Because the second soul to me was sold.

When the nature seen, that I'm very good,
It allowed me to go from life on a short time,
And gave me second soul while slept I,
So I have two humans inside, - nature's rhime.

Chorus:
The world has two sides in a humans,
Two sides are everywhere in world,
But I have not two sides in one soul,
Because the second soul to me was sold.

I can not to control both souls,
So I'm very good, I'm very bad,
With the double-cored body
I'm funny or I'm sad.

Chorus:
The world has two sides in a humans,
Two sides are everywhere in world,
But I have not two sides in one soul,
Because the second soul to me was sold.
*************************************************

I live in this world not very long,
But my second soul - longer, and much,
So I can be silly or very smart,
But I can't to my core touch.

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 29, 2010 at 12:13pm

My earlier lyrics:

Sometimes I think what is death for us, what is life and what wates us after,
Sometimes I'm mad, because the life is very good, but every human must to say "Goodbye",
Sometimes I forget that life has own end and I'm very happy, but the thoughts
Remember me that nobody's life is eternal, with these thoughts I wanna cry.
With these thougts I wanna cry!

Chorus:
Cry is only thing, that doesn't let us death forget,
Cry till your face will be not dry but wet.
I, I don't believe that death is end to all,
It won't be that we went to the fly, but in the end we'll fall.

The death is our fate, because in our world everything have it's end,
I don't believe that life is one because a few time in the life we spend,
Because the night is not eternal, so we must to live again,
It couldn't be that mortal soul of every man.

Chorus:
Cry is only thing, that doesn't let us death forget,
Cry till your face will be not dry but wet.
I, I don't believe that death is end to all,
It won't be that we went to the fly, but in the end we'll fall.

***************************************************************************
Sometimes I think, sometimes I'm mad,
Sometimes I about death forget,
But we should live and every time like first,
But we should live and shouldn't in the death be lost.
But we should live with hope that will be started a new day,
That we won't in the dark and full of mad night stay,
That new star born, so someone need to see the sky,
That our souls will not to fall, but only fly.

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 29, 2010 at 6:55am

And, by the way, English is not my mother tongue) I speak in Russian)

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 29, 2010 at 5:51am

Oh, thank you)

Comment by Daniel Acosta on January 28, 2010 at 5:30pm

Those are some sick and deep lyrics Andy, you will be a gret lyricist someday.

Comment by Andy Potapov on January 28, 2010 at 3:42am

Thanks for comment, Johny.

Another one text:

I know the last one minute is left,
I know my life is a wicked draft,
But why should I give up in this fight?
I have to choose between darkness and light.
We should to do all that we can do
To live in this rude world with mad through,
To live in this rude world, not to die,
Don't give up, my friend, please don't cry.
So stand up, my friend and go ahead
With pride in your eyes and cold in your head,
With fire in heart and with clean thoughts.
Don't give up, my friend, please make your choice.

So we must to fight for our lives,
So we must to live for the light,
And why do I ask the world to be
When only one man can save this world - me?

Why do I live in the fear?
Why do I live in the night?
Why should I take in the hands spear?
Why should I be the soldier of light?

My friend, the last one second is left,
You know my life is a wicked draft,
You can't give up in this ugly fight.
You have to choose between darkness and light.
So fight my friend with faith in the world
Without madness and wich isn't sold,
Without a hope in heart to be alive,
Don't give up, my friend, please don't cry.
Don't give up, my friend, don't stop to fight,
Keep burning in chest and go with pride,
Don't lose all the faith in better life,
So throw down your love and take the knife.

So we must to fight for our lives,
So we must to live for the light,
And why do I ask the world to be
When only one man can save this world - me?

Why do I live in the fear?
Why do I live in the night?
Why should I take in the hands spear?
Why should I be the soldier of light?

Comment by Johnny Montgomery on January 28, 2010 at 12:27am

Andy.

I like the basis of your song. A little fine tuning may be needed. But i get a pretty solid feel when i read it. I enjoy the topic and the voice in it too. Maybe I'll post something on here for opinions.

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